poetry
57I found some old poems of mine,what do you think
The song of Winter
Bang,bang,bang like the sound of a drum
the rain beats upon my window pane
Boom,boom,boom make it go back to where it came
Rattle,shake and tinkle my heart flutters with fright
Oh how I hate the sounds of Winter night.
Swoosh,swoosh,swoosh the wind blows in the trees
Xylophone melodies vibrate from my knees
Ting,ting,you can hear my teeth sing clear
The symphony of Winter night is drawing ever near.
Clap,clap,clap the thunder strikes a chord
All the other elements commence
Then wait for their reward.
Sweet 16(NOT)
My worst fear has come to light,she's found boys
Tired of playing dollies or with her other toys
Now it's makeup shovelled on like cement
Heaving bosoms all set to torment.
Skirts no longer than a belt,knickers that resemble string
Endless knocks on the door
And the bloomin phone always rings.
Vivid red marks decorate her chest
At her age she claims to know best
It's Love she wails with lust in her eyes
Oh hunni listen to your mum and reach for the skies.
One minute it's John, then Peter then Paul
My little lass is heading for a fall.
"Are you on the pill?" I cry,is he using precaution
"Oh shut up" she screams not heeding my warning.
In nine months time the damage could be done
Instead of being a teenager she may be a single mum.......
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I like them both! The first one evokes spellbinding feelings of night winter's blizzard, which is really cool. The second is excellent as well, though I don't envy your position. That sounds pretty tough.
I really enjoyed both of your poems I could almost feel the cold winters night which is no mean feat as I am in Spain and although it is two oclock in the morning it is still 30 celsius as I write this. The second one paints a vivid picture of how hard it is to parent a teenager.
WOOOOOOOOOOW....oh yeh definitely every mom's worse nightmare.. God its a disaster. Couldn't agree any better!!! Great Job~~~ :D
have been away from this site for too long lol.........thanks every one for ur comments my confidence has swelled and tonight iw ill finally write another hub love to u all and i cam back from Alcudia only last tuesday the 20th and wish i was still there BRRrrrrrrr











Tom Rubenoff 3 years ago
I particularly like the second one, every parent's nightmare. Nice stuff!