poetry

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By bevy400

I found some old poems of mine,what do you think

               The song of Winter

Bang,bang,bang like the sound of a drum

the rain beats upon my window pane

Boom,boom,boom make it go back to where it came

Rattle,shake and tinkle my heart flutters with fright

Oh how I hate the sounds of Winter night.

 

Swoosh,swoosh,swoosh the wind blows in the trees

Xylophone melodies vibrate from my knees

Ting,ting,you can hear my teeth sing clear

The symphony of Winter night is drawing ever near.

 

Clap,clap,clap the thunder strikes a chord

All the other elements commence

Then wait for their reward.

 

 

                Sweet 16(NOT)

My worst fear has come to light,she's found boys

Tired of playing dollies or with her other toys

Now it's makeup shovelled on like cement

Heaving bosoms all set to torment.

 

Skirts no longer than a belt,knickers that resemble string

Endless knocks on the door 

And the bloomin phone always rings.

 

Vivid red marks decorate her chest

At her age she claims to know best

It's Love she wails with lust in her eyes

Oh hunni listen to your mum and reach for the skies.

 

One minute it's John, then Peter then Paul

My little lass is heading for a fall.

"Are you on the pill?" I cry,is he using precaution

"Oh shut up" she screams not heeding my warning.

In nine months time the damage could be done

Instead of being a teenager she may be a single mum.......

Comments

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Tom Rubenoff 3 years ago

I particularly like the second one, every parent's nightmare. Nice stuff!

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bevy400 Hub Author 3 years ago

Thanks actually wrote this one about my boyfriends daughter.xx

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Benjimester Level 5 Commenter 3 years ago

I like them both! The first one evokes spellbinding feelings of night winter's blizzard, which is really cool. The second is excellent as well, though I don't envy your position. That sounds pretty tough.

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bevy400 Hub Author 3 years ago

by heck lad you are good for my ego....As for the second poem it is actually about my boyfriends daughter,mine is not so bad at present lol.xxxxx

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annie laurie 2 years ago

I really enjoyed both of your poems I could almost feel the cold winters night which is no mean feat as I am in Spain and although it is two oclock in the morning it is still 30 celsius as I write this. The second one paints a vivid picture of how hard it is to parent a teenager.

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Uriel Level 3 Commenter 2 years ago

WOOOOOOOOOOW....oh yeh definitely every mom's worse nightmare.. God its a disaster. Couldn't agree any better!!! Great Job~~~ :D

bev 2 years ago

have been away from this site for too long lol.........thanks every one for ur comments my confidence has swelled and tonight iw ill finally write another hub love to u all and i cam back from Alcudia only last tuesday the 20th and wish i was still there BRRrrrrrrr

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